What was the focus of this shot? Her fingers? Her expression?
Lack of this just crushes any interest here>>3190613
If I had a week, I couldn't list all the reasons this photo doesn't work.>>3190614
Looks like a crime scene photo>>3190616
No underwear, edgy teenager smoking cig. Pass unless this is for an ad on CL "Girl needs $50 to make her rent">>3190617
Again, no sharp focus. What are we supposed to be paying attention to here?>>3190618
Low angle and skewed at that dilutes a decent candid.>>3190620
Too far away and over exposed. Typical problem with cell phone cameras.>>3191573
She needed to be looked RIGHT AT YOUR LENS, and backround fails to isolate her >>3191071
A good idea wrecked>>3191574
Again too far away and no focal point>>3191577
I gather you used post to correct WB and exposure but come on, you should have nailed when the picture was taken>>3191627
She looks ill at ease here. You need to establish a rapport first.>>3191671
I concur >>3193071
Is this your version of that elf girl from "Lord Of The Rings" ? Sun should be MORE out of focus or you should have used a tele to give yourself some emotional distance from the subject.