desu I just looked at the image in higher res and it looks like shit. Has this really weird sharpening, shaking and/or artifacting going on. The fuck was this even shot onAnd as the other anon pointed out, the one light star is clearly fake, as the other two light sources aren't doing that. To add to the sloppy composition, it looks like he's just wearing whatever random clothes he had on at the time, and that posing just looks awkward.
Whatever concept you think is so wonderful here, needs serious refinement. OP needs to go out again and shoot with stronger, clearer intent and direction.