I like it anon, very cool photo.>>3945520
imo this edit kind of sucks, the first thing you should've done is bring down the highlights to get some more detail in his sky. I also think that the lens flare (and its resulting haze/low contrast) gives the initial photo a lot of attitude, so I wouldn't fight it by increasing contrast/sat. Maybe a bit of vibrancy, just to make the grass look a little less lifeless, or maybe bring out the blue curve in the highlights to help make the sky appear behind those clouds.>>3945527
Definitely better than the first edit. From here I would suggest playing around with crops just to see how it changes the feel of the image.
overall nice picture you can keep around for a long time without feeling like it's a waste of space